And every city destroyed gets a battle ship named after it.
@dotnet978 ай бұрын
The radio traffic bit was very well done!
@worldcomicsreview35411 ай бұрын
"So anyway, we just quoted Sun Tzu at them. And when we ran out of him, Bruce Lee"
@jamiepatterson121411 ай бұрын
Another story that's the beginning, chapter one, of a longer story. When the hand extended in friendship is swatted away, and destruction results, what do the attackers expect to occur afterwards? They started something they didn't fully understand, with a species they didn't know. Now, with nothing but fear as a companion, they flee from the very thing they started, against a species born of wars. They broke all of the windows without contemplating the consequences of their actions. Now the owners have come seeking retribution for their erant ways. And they are pissed!
@PeterLGଈ11 ай бұрын
This is better. Rather than just rampaging around the galaxy, humans are offering the hand of friendship to everyone ... well, except for those arseholes 😂
@Amoth_oth_ras_shash11 ай бұрын
aye , while i do adore the 'noble savages' trope.. the stories where humans doess some hairs edge from being helpless pacifists and only survives either due to so op tech its silly or has so thick plot hide its boring , or gets civilization wide ptsd they ignored over some previous butchery gets very dull very fast but a humanity or 'gaia species' that gives everyone a fair chance ,but do seek to repay in kind for despots of exterminators that not changes.. is far more delicious blend of poetic justice and real life pragmatic greyness
@russellperry990211 ай бұрын
I tpp quickly become enthralled and would like more from this story teller.
@jamesb725711 ай бұрын
Just note after looking at the author's reddit post's, there is no nor will be a follow up to this story. Take it as you will.
@kevinmclay956011 ай бұрын
That's a shame.
@chriskelso7239 ай бұрын
Grrr. 😢
@-eternal9 ай бұрын
My brain melted reading your comment.
@Hypercube20178 ай бұрын
Then get someone _else_ to do it. A well done fanfic would be good. Say it’s building off this work, then present the extra story.
@Aabergm10 ай бұрын
Given humanities propensity for revenge I think the Thriven got off lucky by not being genocided out of existence.
@anonygent9 ай бұрын
Not over yet.
@SuperRootUser11 ай бұрын
Ahh, the ending from "Without Warning" just needs a reference to the Mom from Hone Improvment.
@Questor-ky2fv11 ай бұрын
Good one, but as another commenter asked, will there be a part 2? This story has more to tell. And I want the Thriven to get their just desserts.
@Kenpachihero18 ай бұрын
The "seeds of time" quote is from Macbeth if anyone is wondering.
@Amoth_oth_ras_shash11 ай бұрын
delicious.. butchery always inspires siblings to raise legions of hordes with nothing but hatred for you.. the icon of a foe to all life , and seek to bring you what hath been inspired
@KirkDavis196611 ай бұрын
This is what I hate, don't start something if you aint gonna finish..Like the Last humans WTF?
@ajhil565311 ай бұрын
What an odd and unsatisfying way to end a story.
@marvinjohnson248811 ай бұрын
They broke in and roused the Pitt Bulls. May the gods have mercy on their souls. Because we won't.
@wakcedout11 ай бұрын
The thrivens biggest error…,leaving survivors.
@ghostshadow9046Ай бұрын
A repost of a story posted over a year ago, it is a good story, much better than many of the new AI generated stories I have seen lately
@tylerboone65843 ай бұрын
Look up "Without Warning", a TV movie from 1994. That will give you how this started.I watched in when it premiered 30 years ago.
@nickeywallace525511 ай бұрын
Can't wait for part 2
@you244911 ай бұрын
But at least they'll have a body count longer than King Kong’s Arm! That's at least something to be proud of.
@sparkeyjamesАй бұрын
Adios Thriven. You had a good run but now it's your last chapter and the Federation won't be able to help you.
@SuperEndospore9 ай бұрын
Damn Thriven chucking stuff about willy nilly.
@larsharris11 ай бұрын
With issues of translations, of cultural misunderstandings. To speak in riddles? Seems unwise. But makes a little more sense later. I question the wisdom of Voyager.
@Isaic029 ай бұрын
My thought as well. Unless they are just trolling the galaxy, then it's bad writing.
@indigenoussober4078 ай бұрын
I like names more than acronyms. If and when we become space faring, I hope we can have more sense to have a name instigated a title. U.T.C sounds so lame.
@ramonibarra732911 ай бұрын
Part two?
@StephanePoirierGaming11 ай бұрын
Yes! Part 2 please.
@sethg61579 ай бұрын
why make a audio reading of a story with no ending.
@lizard4508 ай бұрын
AI
@penitent24018 ай бұрын
You mixed up the voices, human ambassador first has low and serious voice and at the end has the high pitch panicky voice
@spiritofthewolf15x9 ай бұрын
Just as I was getting hooked... It ended... Where is part 2?
@jeddavis477111 ай бұрын
Please discontinue the high pitched voices, they sound forced, false, and annoying. I like the stories, but those voices turn me off.
@GLORYInintact11 ай бұрын
I like the voices! So you f off
@ultimateanthony188311 ай бұрын
Those voices are ok
@Zigmeister6711 ай бұрын
Don't listen.
@shadowling7777711 ай бұрын
It’s not that high pitched lol
@PabloCruise939810 ай бұрын
Its an AI narration trying to emphasize feelings and emotions.. It's actually kinda funny at times..
@sailguy201010 ай бұрын
Post part 2, ok?
@jamiemezs989111 ай бұрын
Thank God this human's won't tea drinkers. ❤
@murasame507110 ай бұрын
part 2 ?
@Joe-xj2tb11 ай бұрын
You need to work the audio!!
@michelelyons94109 ай бұрын
An excellent story, but it seems unfinished. Is there a second part? Is this the beginning of a series? I, for one, would have some sharp questions for the alien organization------if they were so "civilized" and had so many rules, then why did they do nothing when the Thriven attempted to destroy Humanity? Then I would tell them that the war would end when the Thriven were extinct. And if they didn't like it we cold deal with hem just as well. If this is a stand alone story, it needs a better ending. It feels entirely incomplete. You have to bring your story to a close, not just end it in mid sentence. - What is really interesting is that this kind of thing could shape Humanity's destiny. If out first experience with alien life was with an enemy and near extinction, then it would make humanity react with extreme violence. We could well become the boogy man of the galaxy: hard, materialistic, and without mercy when dealing with others. I could well imagine this being the history of the beginning of an empire.
@acefire405011 ай бұрын
So you're not gonna finish that segment of the story shame on you.
@tkell316 ай бұрын
Please put the high pitched whiny voice to bed. It's impossible to listen too.
@a.m.v.693811 ай бұрын
These AI generated stories are pretty good.
@OptimusWombat11 ай бұрын
Honest question: how do we know the stories are written by AI?
@a.m.v.693811 ай бұрын
@@OptimusWombat although I could be wrong that these stories are AI generated I’m pretty sure that they are. The three main reason for me are #1. the sheer amount of stories that are put out on this channel #2. the similarities of the stories themselves #3. the style in the way they are written. I guess there could be a writer out there with this style of writing but dang don’t you think he would be exhausted….and how would he get paid for so many stories, I don’t think a channel with 32k subscribers could afford it. But don’t get me wrong I do like listening to these stories AI generated or not they are very entertaining. I think this the future of KZbin.
@OptimusWombat11 ай бұрын
@@a.m.v.6938 to the best of my knowledge, these stories are all taken directly from reddit posts (and there are lots of them, posted by different users), they're not original to this channel. All this channel does is perform a text to speech conversion. While it's possible that many of the stories posted to reddit are indeed written by AI, it's not this channel that's writing them.
@bloobeeblah11 ай бұрын
Take off you tinfoil hat buddy. yes the voice is AI but the story is human created from a writing prompt subreddit like \hfy or \writingprompts
@senorsoloq11 ай бұрын
The authors original script is linked in the description, only the voice and images are created by AI.