The Zombie Chronicles: Birmingham, Alabama Zombie Outbreak | An apocalypse Audio Story

[@jaredmoyes81]

Been subbed for a few weeks now. I would like to say that I've been following attentively, but i put the stories on and drift off to sleep instead. Might explain the weird dreams 🤔.

[@sgt0187]

Surprisingly happy that one of your shorts popped up in my feed. Not the usual type of thing I would listen to but I enjoyed this nonetheless.

[@storystream10009]

@@sgt0187 thank you for the positive vibes

[@neilkendrick4976]

Aw eh, the lights are goin off, I have a scotch waiting for me: I'm going to enjoy this {ten minutes in, I need the bathroom, oh, I do like pause} back to sheer audio pleasure. Thank you, for this well-written upload.

[@storystream10009]

@@neilkendrick4976 thank you

[@goutambhola5646]

This was a really great one

[@storystream10009]

@@goutambhola5646 thanks for positive vibes , I appreciate it

[@soultrypoultry4979]

Military background kept him looking at the monitors but hunting background helped them hear up to fight zombies? This stores is lame.

[@gregwrites2334]

Thanks for posting your story! I enjoyed it!

[@mvincent5621]

Steven and Chris are taking asset protection to a whole new level👍👍

[@texlougatorbait]

I love the beginning of zombie books, after about 30mins it goes into the human against human stuff witch I DO NOT like, why cant they ban together and work as a team. I know man is horrible but come on man.

[@dchardinaycole5944]

It’s unfortunate, but it’s our nature the decent into madness. It makes sense that would happen.

[@storystream10009]

@@texlougatorbait unfortunately Humans are terrible to each other and if I wrote a book we’re they all helped each other I would get 100 comments about how terrible my book is. But keep an eye open, I will write a story like that just too see the response

[@texlougatorbait]

@@dchardinaycole5944 I dont agree we have a lot of good people in the world and they would pull together. I do know that books and movies always show bad guys winning instead of the good guy. Damn media

[@afterdarkwithchurch]

I'd like to think they'd be more people trying to help one another but I know there'd be just as meny ass holes trying to take one another's shit

[@mvincent5621]

Unfortunately human nature has not changed since Cain killed Abel, and likely never will

[@ItsSamStone]

Very enjoyable story overall! Although, the mouthed "special effects" gave me mild anxiety attacks every time they spontaneously popped up at MAXIMUM VOLUME lmao... but hey, I'm listening to this while I work and it's keeping me awake every time I start getting too comfortable. It's a positive "side effect" and I guess that's the goal anyways, right? Lol! Keep up the good work. I love zombie stories! :)

[@shaunbassett6]

Damn bro chiCRACK!!!! How do you like it !?!? Chill out man................ thanx for the book

[@lesbooth2837]

wow, no AI. Original & raw. 👏👏👏👏 Great job.

[@hospitalcakewalk]

25:17 ... No American in this world can mispronounce that word that bad.

[@MrBrowncoatX]

Good series! But as a native Birminghamster, no one calls it Montgomery Highway. It's almost always referred to as "31". And pending where you are around the greater metro area is how you'd use it as a point of reference. Such as 31 in Hoover, or 31 in Vestavia, etc.

[@storystream10009]

@@MrBrowncoatX thanks for the feedback. I do the best i can with google maps considering I live 2000 miles away

[@waltzielong]

When I was ,18 my mother and I visited her sister in birmingham and we went to the zoo that is why I am listing so far so good.

[@lottekvist2092]

Words to avoid: dwindling supplies, makeshift living quarters, stark reminder, anything kicking in, gravity of the situation…

[@jaredmoyes81]

What she said

[@butter_akbar2688]

Yay where are my Alabama people at

[@TimothyBillups-n8d]

Right here

[@ChristopheRobyn]

Alex City here

[@nathanrivera5782]

Huntsville area

[@RobertM78]

From Columbus, MS. Only 10 miles away.

[@Sevn581]

☕

[@lesleylawson8094]

I'm from Talladega Alabama! not far!

[@habeebideemashayish2750]

Can't say I'm a fan. This story had a moderately good premise, but there were some plot holes and language issues. First, "mate" and "blimey" followed by "partner" in speech... Doesn't work. Second, a sporting goods store without a massive stock of dehydrated and mre style food is pretty silly. The jerky alone would keep these two sociopaths alive for months. They're awful. They're the bad guys. The group that approaches the store has no clue if anybody is in there, or if they're alive... so they just go straight for the kill shot? No warning, just murder. And it's Gatorade. Gay-tor-aid, not gat-or-aid (rhymes with cat). Had to call it quits ⅓ of the way through. I'm going to imagine that these two asshats end up getting sniped down for no reason, just like they're doing when i quit listening.

[@Sevn581]

🧟‍♂️🧟🧟‍♀️🤖

[@latishabarnett8639]

Close to home 😂 about an hour from me lol

[@TxPerfection]

How are the zombies already decaying and rotting when its only been going on 3 days

[@jasonj5925]

Human bodies start decaying immediately upon death. A lot of damage can be done in 3 days, depending on environment.

[@prettyprincess8187]

Decay starts in hours

[@mistersanchez8023]

I really enjoyed this but I think there needs to be some improvement on audio-ish and pacing between chapters because it kinda felt like being speed read aloud but that's just my understanding, by no means am I attempting to be disrespectful whatsoever.

[@storystream10009]

Thank you for the feedback, I appreciate you. I hope to improve moving forward

[@brickmason7301]

Easy to tell the writer has never been to this area. Mark"s is in Vestavia, an affluent suburb of Birmingham.

[@jamescarter-hl4ql]

Why didn’t they use their sound suppressors better known as silencers

[@storystream10009]

@@jamescarter-hl4ql their business doesn’t sell silencers, since their illegal in most states

[@Slimnasty209]

Broke back mountain zombies edition

[@MortuusTemplum]

Can't finish, you don't have to yell the sound of weapons being shot

[@storystream10009]

@@MortuusTemplum it’s an audible book, I’m not an ai robot reading monotone for the entire book.

[@MortuusTemplum]

@@storystream10009 I can tell it is not AI reading and am grateful for that.

[@storystream10009]

@ but all My new stories, I stopped yelling the gun details, so I don’t blow out the ear drums of head phone users. Thanks for listening

[@MortuusTemplum]

I am sorry, I did not mean to write the first message in that why. I think everything I listened to from you is great.

[@MortuusTemplum]

@@storystream10009 LOL, will do. Thank you for the great work

[@pintsizedprincess1919]

Stupid raiders! Ruining it for everyone. They were so lucky they worked at a gun sporting goods store and not say a florist. 😅

[@RebelandDave]

Mate!? Are they from Birmingham, England?

[@femalehero420]

Kinda funny the Aussie slang pops in

[@storystream10009]

@@femalehero420 I added it for fun, since one of my co workers years ago was from Australia, I got a lot of hateful comments about it,

[@femalehero420]

@ well, it’s all good. It does stick out but was consistent for the character. Also, belt fed machine guns aren’t sold in sports shops. They are class III items and even AK47’s sold in sports stores and welded to only except low cap mags. Js….lol, I do weapons for the gov.

[@jamescarter-hl4ql]

Where is the woman at? They forgot about her.

[@storystream10009]

@@jamescarter-hl4ql she not really part of the story, the focus is on the 2 M.C.

[@morganfreeman1507]

This replaced my usual jovial demeanor

[@coreopolis]

Holes holes holes

[@storystream10009]

@@coreopolis that’s a good Disney show

[@eleveneleven572]

How would you know that there was a zombie apocalypse in Birmingham ? Just asking.

[@storystream10009]

I dont know, But I know that some parts of portland, you would think you were in the middle of one

[@soultrypoultry4979]

Wtf is a belt drive barrel machine gun?

[@jaredmoyes81]

Yeah...the author meant "belt-fed," which is a machine gun that is supplied with ammunition via bullets that are strung together on a belt. Google search "240B," "249," or "M2" machine guns and you'll see. At least that was the nomenclature when I was in the army.

[@lorddemonoss3945]

2:00 hard pass. I heard this plot before and it always ends stupid.

[@NinjaFox-pe3dv]

Of course. Yet another apocalypse book where the main character is , yep, ex military. They of course have suppressors. And can hot-wire machines. Oh, and heavy machinery operators. Because of course they are. 🙄🙄🙄

[@ProdigyMike23]

Columbus Ohio?

[@ECONOTANKCommander]

The scenario is great but please don't do blam crack pop etc...... It's old school Batman and Robin ridiculous

[@ceesman762usmc]

Some sus verbiage being used and actions.

[@hospitalcakewalk]

At first I thought this wasn't AI.... but gateraid????? Gateraid???? IM SORRY, WHAT????

[@Ahuman-g5g]

Please, for the love of god, stop making gun noises. Please. My god man, it hurts

[@storystream10009]

I stopped doing that in all of my newer stories, Thanks for the feedback

[@Ahuman-g5g]

They waste to much ammo

[@jamescarter-hl4ql]

Narrator makes it sound like these two guys are in a relationship. Don’t be so feminine your description of their relationship.

[@bullstag47]

Ehhh, not terrible but needs work

[@storystream10009]

@@bullstag47 thanks for the feed back, trying too improve with every story

[@bullstag47]

Using Australian slang in an Alabama story? I’m from there, people don’t call each other mate or say quarrel…took me totally out of it

[@storystream10009]

@@bullstag47 thanks for the feedback

[@LordsEnigma]

Yeah the PVP always ruins for me any time they use it just shows a lack of understanding from this side of the fence into the Demon Zombie Apocalypse of the Undead fence. Another one of the same old stories of rinse and repeat with different names is all, just predictable is all. Isaiah 49:26 26 And {(I will "feed" them that {("oppress")} thee with their own "flesh";)} and they shall be “drunken” with their own blood, “as” with sweet wine: and {all “flesh” shall know} that I the Lord am thy Saviour and thy Redeemer, the mighty One of (Jacob=Jesus). Oppress - keep (someone) in subservience and hardship, especially by the unjust exercise of authority. It becomes a Bible problem is all, as the "Darkness" is removed as to "why" you're having an Undead Apocalypse in the first place. As the Undead is a cleanser/cleaner for this intentional purpose brought on by God. As soon as you have Darkened thoughts and desires thousands of Demon Zombies will descend upon your sorry ass! and you will no longer be a "raider". Like the days of Noah, your SOL... The Demon Zombies of the Undead break the Laws of Reality-based sum checker, and they would be "Supernatural". But mankind is prideful and arrogant stubborn, and with ego, in vain and vanities. As People keep insisting it will be a "magic" virus to cause it...

[@jamescarter-hl4ql]

This is a very strange story you strange woman in your compound haven’t heard anything else about her since she got there. You don’t even include her in your plans when you ready to do some thing do you guys have only eyes for each other let’s give the nurse some story Time they act like they have no interest in women come on guy

[@storystream10009]

@@jamescarter-hl4ql she isn’t part of their plans, honestly I was just gonna have them kill her, but it’s not their personality

[@wadereynoldsdeadpool5768]

​@@storystream10009fucked up you would wanna kill a woman during the apocalypse instead of making babies

[@kimireneanderson9645]

Unfortunately I stopped listening for a while when in one story the protagonist found three different sets of survivors that were never referenced again. The setting was Seattle. Really bizarre.

[@willseymour8018]

Damn, dude. Quit shouting in my ears. I know guns are loud. You don't have to prove it.

[@Mana-xd2tp]

Then turn down the fucking volume

[@WithaHardar-mn9mp]

Hearing the narrator yell 'crack' is extremely annoying. You dont need sound effects when reading THATS WHAT THE WORDS ARE FOR....

[@storystream10009]

@@WithaHardar-mn9mp thanks for the feedback