Holy shit, this is a story for the ages. Hats off to the Author
@DrSigma24-75 ай бұрын
Truth. An outstanding narration and story.
@josephhyland89043 ай бұрын
Absolutely agree!
@strategygalactic4 күн бұрын
Thanks! 😊
@month325 ай бұрын
-So you are telling me that those things will come back, even hungrier than before, until we burn all their planets? -Yes. -And that they are unfeeling, violent monsters that just want to eat everything and everyone? -Yes again. -Someone has been reading Heinlein a lot lately it seems. -Who? -Forget about it.
@howardchambers96795 ай бұрын
Hahahaha! Best comment! I often wonder if today's sci fi fans have actually read the old authors. Someone left a comment about inconsistent science facts being distracting, i suggested they read some EE "Doc" Smith. But then I don't suppose reading an actual paperback is a thing for them anymore. Loved Heinlein back in the day. Still have a couple of his books that haven't fallen apart from rereading.
@Lupus_Indomitus5 ай бұрын
And the aliens ask themselves why they hear exterminatus music in the background all of a sudden
@month325 ай бұрын
@@howardchambers9679 Wait till they try reading Philip K. Dick...
@month325 ай бұрын
@@Lupus_Indomitus The flesh is weak, but deeds are forever.
@mikkelnpetersen5 ай бұрын
Was thinking more zergs or tyranids.
@davidwilson96175 ай бұрын
As an epileptic, I find the idea that they practically seized the thing to death hilarious.
@WendiGonerLH3 ай бұрын
Not quite, they put it into a siezure and then shanked it to death while it was still twitching
@EmmTshh5 ай бұрын
I really liked this one, I specially enjoyed that it wasn't an overpowered humanity that won, but a last effort flip of the coin.
@sleeping26965 ай бұрын
Our level of war far out classes our level of technology
@Nevir2025 ай бұрын
Ya, that sounds like humanity. Or more specifically Like Wesley from The Princess Bride. Win by poisoning both glasses and trusting you'll survive lol.
@krevor40955 ай бұрын
Wesley (The Dread Pirate Robert) didn't just trust. He prepared and built an immunity over time. Why? Just in case.
@Ben1117785 ай бұрын
Knowing more than I should, I'd have to say they had already secrety tested it on both people and one of the swarm they had somehow managed to capture and already knew while building the big bang how it would effect both species. The elites don't tempt Fate, but definitely try to control it!
@DrSigma24-75 ай бұрын
True; because if you don't survive, it's no longer your problem....
@anonymouspotato48995 ай бұрын
@@krevor4095 That entire bit was a joke. Iocane powder kills with even the smallest dose. Wesley won by building up an immunity. How do you build up an immunity to a poison...?
@TheBigMagnetАй бұрын
"Are you saying we are the only ones to ever win against these things?" I was expecting: "You are the first."
@wildwikedwanderer12085 ай бұрын
Just in time for lunch. Thanks net. You’re continued work is appreciated
@calumbutter6124Ай бұрын
Possibly tue best HFY I've ever read - and I've read thousands. This is also my fourth time reading it. Thank you author and NN.
@regiliok5 ай бұрын
now i want a part 2 where us and our new space buddy's rip these monsters a new one!
@spacedragon11755 ай бұрын
I want to see the swarm flee in terror
@regiliok4 ай бұрын
@@spacedragon1175 would be fun
@TheHighborn3 ай бұрын
there is part2 by the author on his reddit edit: this narration included part2
@stephenmcbride63595 ай бұрын
Great story. Love the human narration. It would be so cool to hear a group of you narrator's get together and do one, like an old radio play.
@Terran.Marine.23 ай бұрын
It's a fine idea.
@mikegann5515 ай бұрын
Would love to know what the humans were saying and doing. This is one of the better stories on the net! Excellent story!!
@Ben1117785 ай бұрын
Wow! After listening to so many AI broken stories... this was a great one! Minus 1 point for the doubling up of almost the same sentence in the middle of the story... but this story actually had a beginning, middle and understandable end! It had continuity, character development, story telling skills far better than any of the AI stories I've heard!
@kebbitevoke-53195 ай бұрын
Yea net narrator does sometimes repeat himself but that's usually editing mess ups. He truely reads them out.
@srslothington4 ай бұрын
Net Narrator isn’t AI, he’s an actual guy. If you want another actual person reading stories I recommend AggroSquirrelNarrarates
@BBCTopgearfan3 ай бұрын
If you liked this one, you might like his Audible Book. I am a bit biased. But he has a teaser video of the first few chapters.
@isaacdouglas78264 ай бұрын
Finally, a good hfy that's not a show of bloated ego, but genuine determination (and a smidge of luck)
@Brjskdbeikaheus5 ай бұрын
Nice to find an hfy story that’s well written and edited. Great work.
@darthrevan49334 ай бұрын
ONLY IN DEATH DOES DUTY END!!!
@Seaside_Seanster5 ай бұрын
One of the best stories I've heard/read in a while.
@benandrew213 ай бұрын
I'm glad that for once humanity won because of an eleventh-hour ass pull rather than us being so uniquely brilliant/terrible that we just curb stomp whatever pissed us off
@BreadGuy015 ай бұрын
Absolutely riveting story, if there's a next part, I'm all for it!
@martypelletier71223 ай бұрын
I've listened to this story a few times here on this channel and it gets better each and every time. Every time without fail i get choked up hearing it, hats off to the author and to you sir for giving me the ability to feel something again even if its only for a moment.
@theangrygermanlad13285 ай бұрын
The unyielding devourers vs the unyielding devourers. Only difference is that we can use guns, and they cant.
@dandrewtsinnijinnie45045 ай бұрын
We savor the win and fear
@scotthinger63975 ай бұрын
Thank you for NOT leaving us hanging!! Now where is the next part?! Please tell me it is comig soon!!!
@erikjrn40805 ай бұрын
Well written, good voice narration, coherent story, a well executed literary narrator device and perspective that actually suited the story, and I could go on. The best storytellers are still human. They're just not being employed by Hollywood, which instead keeps making AI look good.
@ccrrey61215 ай бұрын
One of the best I ever heard, meant it. Kuddos to author, and amazing narration too👍👍💯
@Terran.Marine.23 ай бұрын
Well, I do hope @Net Narrator finds the time to read the second half of this tale.
@ded29205 ай бұрын
now this is a humanity fuck yeah story entire story had me on the edge of my seat
@wesdavis80185 ай бұрын
Great story and great narration. Keep up the good work.
@dashwhatchamakalit4 ай бұрын
Lol we won a flashbang recovery contest with bugs.
@ChildOfSisyphus5 ай бұрын
Thank You ... A wonderful story to come home from work to. 🌎🚀
@ballroomdru5 ай бұрын
Wow, just wow. Such a good one shot story.
@vikingbanana24045 ай бұрын
Man this needs a part 2
@norneaernourn82404 ай бұрын
So the Geneva Convention do not apply to these monsters... good to know.
@MogofWarАй бұрын
So Humankind invented the HALO and set it to "stun."
@rust54274 ай бұрын
Probably what it's like during the swarm disaster era in HSR
@Edmar_Thorn5 ай бұрын
Love it
@scout.08115 ай бұрын
Oh wow this story was amazing!
@rossdavies82505 ай бұрын
Cracking good yarn, matey. Keep up the good work...
@your_boi_junior45313 ай бұрын
THIS IS GOOD!! amazing love these 20 min storys well still short lol 25-45 min aint short xD
@mycroft165 ай бұрын
Extremely well written. That was a lot of fun to listen to. Actually, I would gladly pay to watch this movie. Being so far away really contributes to the helpless feeling.
@stevedixon9215 ай бұрын
Well narrated fellow human.
@wesdavis80185 ай бұрын
Thanks!
@NetNarrator5 ай бұрын
Thank YOU!
@MrZonehawk5 ай бұрын
Amazing work! Great tension and pacing!
@rumandroses25385 ай бұрын
First 5th dimensional entity
@halogeek65 ай бұрын
greetings mad one! how goes the euclid these eonce?
@rumandroses25385 ай бұрын
@@halogeek6 sadly it is very moist preventing my dimorphisis
@halogeek65 ай бұрын
@@rumandroses2538 sounds about right what with the elder hive crying all the time. i mean who makes tear ducts just cry a literal ocean? and for what it doesnt even feel emotion!
@rumandroses25385 ай бұрын
@@halogeek6 oh it's because if the horngus of the dongfish, gets dry the scungle that connects it to the dillsack shrinks which would make the heteromorphs manifest triggering the earth's bar mitzvah
@kdmbigpig2 ай бұрын
Hey, that's what she said!@@rumandroses2538
@Mountain_bonker5 ай бұрын
Very nice. Just in time for lunch
@nicholasmunroe89894 ай бұрын
I hope there is a part 2 by the author! I LOVED IT!!
@45Mistuikeidentity5 ай бұрын
Time to rip and tear
@Lupus_Indomitus5 ай бұрын
Yep. Go full Warhammer on those biothings ass. They sound an awful lot like tyranids to me.
@45Mistuikeidentity5 ай бұрын
@@Lupus_Indomitus and flood
@richardpickard-cambridge844012 күн бұрын
A very good story without a single bloody Sarah Chen in sight!
@drewgilbertson5 ай бұрын
Zerg go Derp!
@wstavis31355 ай бұрын
Absolutely epic! Well done!
@Questor-ky2fv5 ай бұрын
WOW!😱 Well done!😃👌👍👏🤸🏻♂️
@lilsquire1435 ай бұрын
Cadia stands
@CitizenValve4 ай бұрын
Now….This is a badass story!!!! Bravo!….Bravo!
@johnhenrix3894Ай бұрын
good story. I prpeared coocked and ate pancit and now sitting in my bed just as the final lines are said. Awesome
@ironwolfF15 ай бұрын
A most excellent story, true HFY in all it's glory. (...I'll accept it as an apology for that earlier story you posted...)
@Lupus_Indomitus5 ай бұрын
You mean horrors of first contact?
@ironwolfF15 ай бұрын
@@Lupus_Indomitus No, the 'our children are so much wiser than us' ..... pan-sapien BS non-HFY story.
@Lupus_Indomitus5 ай бұрын
@@ironwolfF1 well, not hfy, but imo it was still better then the story i mentioned. but thats just my opinion
@carlmorrison97895 ай бұрын
This was a good short story. Kudos!
@JRRodriguez-nu7po5 ай бұрын
Excellent story and narration, thank you.
@Argon11154 ай бұрын
Good Story, good narration. I enjoyed this.
@ekhidna45 ай бұрын
This is top-quality stuff. Loved it.
@aquilifergroupАй бұрын
Great writing.
@fallennacht93055 ай бұрын
That was a incredible story
@daavocadoguy57335 ай бұрын
its been a while since i heard this kind of story
@jakobwranne3985 ай бұрын
Can’t wait for part 2!
@greenleafnerfing47492 ай бұрын
certainly a story for the ages
@jordanshadows32533 ай бұрын
Damn this was a good one!!!
@LHCB64 ай бұрын
This is fantastic
@45Mistuikeidentity2 ай бұрын
This is a good one
@eric391755 ай бұрын
Good story, well told! :)
@waltergolston61873 ай бұрын
Now that was a corker!
@savevsdeath5 ай бұрын
Moral of the story: Never give up your guns.
@talyn39325 ай бұрын
That was excellent.
@Corvidknows5 ай бұрын
I enjoyed this story very much. I can tell the author sweated blood to keep it as short as it was, it could have been a novel. Two thots: if the blob fed on planets with life, why did it gain an advantage when it engulfed the moon? Wouldn't that have sapped energy from it? Also, how does a probe outside a spaceship scan the brains of humans inside? But the hfy quotient was too high on this one to mind such details too much.
@AlleluiaElizabeth5 ай бұрын
There were defenders on the moon when it took it, most likely.
@krisgibbon21994 ай бұрын
@AlleluiaElizabeth Not to mention the loss of all the defensive emplacements.
@donchichivagabond15785 ай бұрын
Now this is a story!!!
@chrisdufresne93593 ай бұрын
I'm doing my part!
@66Lynnie5 ай бұрын
Fantastic!
@jamescustodio30944 ай бұрын
Hey Netty, where's part 2! There is a part 2, I just checked the Reddit.
@NuggetGal4 ай бұрын
i bet the swarm landed in volgograd
@Logajam.5 ай бұрын
Im going to miss all the aquatic mammals and sharks. Who all drowned/sufficated when the disruptor was activated.
@Ben1117785 ай бұрын
Meh. An ocean with out sharks ain't that bad a thing. But the aquatic mammals would survive, being capable of holding their breath far longer than a himan can.. and the humans survived. The same as turtles, snakes, crab n lobster types, the aquatic mammals be fine.. the ones too small who can't would more than likely naturally float to the surface and automation take over as it's all sketched out, like humanity did.
@Neteruk4 ай бұрын
So you're saying they're perfect targets for our grey goo?
@ANGRYWOLVERINE2060-ft2nc5 ай бұрын
holodeck. well done.
@I.C.U-c7l5 ай бұрын
Now this was a great story.....
@dingopowell94365 ай бұрын
Very riveting
@ericr.palmer820025 күн бұрын
that was fun.
@doodlePimp5 ай бұрын
Pretty good story.
@chrisweiss63635 ай бұрын
Great story
@andrewerickson66904 ай бұрын
Someone started up haarp
@yormhammerson5305 ай бұрын
The sons of dorn heed and march!
@mattstrandquist21483 ай бұрын
AD VICTORIUM!
@beingsneaky5 ай бұрын
welp where is part 2 - 100??
@chaoticjester4585 ай бұрын
dude fought the Halo flood
@MogofWarАй бұрын
Apparently the Precursors could have saved themselves a lot of heartache if they had simply given the HALO a stun setting.
@chrisdixon70995 ай бұрын
If they just let us fight years ago we would have fought like this and our world would be different now.
@kinglito95694 ай бұрын
Is there a full story of this ? 😮
@MidKnight_Sicario187Ай бұрын
Is this Enders game?
@-MeatsOfEvil-5 ай бұрын
#667, saved you from evil, you're welcome! 😉
@somethingsomethingtextings10015 ай бұрын
Aren’t the enemy just tyranids from warhammer 40k just weaker and less effective
@phxJohn20104 ай бұрын
Well that doesn't make sense. You can't just "adapt" to something like that. That's not how biology works.
@Terran.Marine.23 ай бұрын
I do not see how the swarm could adapt to attack there were no survivors, no communication to other swarm beings.
@krisgibbon21993 ай бұрын
In the reddit comments, the author explains it as the swarm is literally one collective entity. It would be as if your arm suddenly became paralyzed. You can't feel your arm, but you're still somewhat aware of what's happening to it.
@Amoth_oth_ras_shash5 ай бұрын
hmm ,but with that complexity of intelligence and self modification capabilities should not the swarm started to track the transmissions from those deep space probes back to the supposed 'dead' planets and got ..curious ? then agen , maby it was something like entangled or 'split' particles used for the remote control that not left any 'particle traces' though also , considering its not just a planet but a galaxy extinction situation having lost a couple of billions when hearing it more or lees was a bio version of the 'grey goo' scenario should have made the general rather go ''oh we 'only' lost a couple billions' ...and then pause the conversation to quickly inform all surviving scientists in those fields and governments so that the short term drafting of every able bodied person for combat and every baseline cognitive stable person for production should be extended indefinitely and a civilization wide swift information dispersion arranged for all to understand why , as the general return to the first alien contact diplomacy while others start design plans for generation ships and either meteor canons or flat out solar nova inducing catalyst warheads all while every factory not used to re-arm the current forces start supply a rapid reconstruction and expansion of the lunar base , but with equall frenzy also the deployment of armada of stellar raw resource harvesting and the foundries and orbital dry docks needed to build self sufficient migration war fleets to send out both as 'survival seeds' and also as vanguards of those tactical system strike generation ships before said general also bring news at least one species civilization where ready to form a pact of mutual survival and extermination with a complete share of all its assets and manpower how ever humans see wish to use it for the war doctrines and species quirks that provided the only victory ever vs the bio swarm