Thesis Statements: Four Steps to a Great Essay | 60second Recap®

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*stares at screen for five minutes *tears start coming down face

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+enteresvirse the feels

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Dropping out doesnt seem so bad now

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Ima agree lmfaoo

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A thesis statement focuses your ideas into one or two sentences. It should present the topic of your paper and also make a comment about your position in relation to the topic. Your thesis statement should tell your reader what the paper is about and also help guide your writing and keep your argument focused. Are you a student? Inbox me at [e-mail] and I will help you with your coursework. Best wishes!

[@chriscannon4616]

Fr bruh I’m only watching this video cuz my English teacher don’t explain shit to us

[@ella_sthetics]

"You cant write an essay without reading the book" Oh we'll see about that

[@estherjeanbart1552]

Tiny Thing 🤣🤣🤣

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A thesis statement focuses your ideas into one or two sentences. It should present the topic of your paper and also make a comment about your position in relation to the topic. Your thesis statement should tell your reader what the paper is about and also help guide your writing and keep your argument focused. Are you a student? Inbox me at [e-mail] and I will help you with your coursework. Best wishes!

[@pitchounthecat4556]

lol

[@jarondavis9795]

Hahahahahahaha

[@Mr-mr-mr10]

HAHAHAHA DEAD

[@HertNiks]

OK, now how do I write 25 pages about this 1 question?

[@strawberry-33-30]

Hert Niks LMFAO

[@34missgreen]

Right! #TheRealStruggle

[@edgysteamer6969]

Right

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[@BoRickersonMcFoosters]

Examples, quotes. Then use multiple unnecessarily placed sentences concerning said examples and quotes building on them to make clearer to a reader what you meant in those examples and quotes. Its great filler for long essays and teachers enjoy seeing a student make a effort to make a novice reader understand what it is that they are writing about.

[@plushpainterofficial2879]

Thesis statement: Restate the prompt + because, +idea 1, + idea 2, + idea 3.

[@OliverRWeber]

OMG! THANK YOU! I feel like I owe you something!

[@plushpainterofficial2879]

+King Libra I'm just glad that I help

[@romanempire8705]

More helpful than the video XD

[@EMan-ls6yt]

PlushPainter Official No, no and you guessed it NO. That is not how you write a thesis in college nor high school. Are you in middle school? If you would like I can demonstrate a proper thesis

[@zydricviray9470]

nah yall r duuuuum its ur topic+the theme+ and the impact=thesis got it from my history teach and nhd national history day(yall r dum beside Emmanuel Mekasha

[@nehroberts2871]

Who's here rn in quarantine trying to figure out how to write a thesis and hv watched 20 videos on it because you still don't understand

[@serenaarts1974]

I’m same as u but this is the first video and it’s rlly helpful

[@SobhanAllah2]

I am✋✋

[@stuartsimp6985]

this is so me

[@edmondrayfilipino2168]

Hahahaha wtf

[@Kingdaybreak]

that pretty much me

[@nickdavis5516]

"You can't write an essay without reading the book." How do you think I passed high school?

[@ghost1852]

95 likes, kachow

[@lowe1877]

"60 second recap" *video is 4 min and 30 sec***

[@eternalyap]

this is why I have trust issues

[@genesislopez6840]

😬😂😂

[@nehagolia6024]

ya... like seriosly

[@jadem1876]

I love how teachers say things like “you can’t write a paper without reading the book” yet I’m out here get a 96 on 10 page papers of books I’ve never even picked up.

[@Siterus]

watch out guys, we have a badass over here

[@luciadelviso9342]

Are your papers correct?

[@kathya1956]

Sad

[@lessiechester]

You have to read the book, or at least know something about the book. I wonder if you're even writing your own papers. You can get kick out of school for plagiarism.

[@jadem1876]

L L - dude of course I’m writing my own papers and no I never plagiarize it’s all my own words. Don’t assume things abt me that you don’t know. I’m a good writer and I love to read but if I don’t enjoy the book whatsoever I’m not reading it. Sorry that I broke the system and know how to please teachers

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3:40 am i the only one that heard that sound

[@samantha-tw3jl]

i heard OHH

[@jose_janai20]

I heard a moan

[@venii1219]

That was my brain dying

[@aarushmalepatal6103]

me too

[@lexikirk9614]

No lol

[@hannahcouncill]

0:32 lol fight me

[@kyla738]

RIght! We got Sparknotes

[@alexott50]

watch the movie preview, gets A+

[@fancycockroach5585]

fax

[@frankb.8071]

I'm doing a paper on the jungle. I'm not even gonna bother to read it, and I got my thesis statement down. they can't hold us brother

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A thesis statement focuses your ideas into one or two sentences. It should present the topic of your paper and also make a comment about your position in relation to the topic. Your thesis statement should tell your reader what the paper is about and also help guide your writing and keep your argument focused. Are you a student? Inbox me at [e-mail] and I will help you with your coursework. Best wishes!

[@indecisive.325]

"You can't write a paper without reading the book" Me, who has Spark Note'd the sh-t out of my paper: "Oh you can, and I'll do it again"

[@brizm7193]

Is it me or does her Thesis Statement seem like a long run on sentence?

[@lindseyideus8742]

Bri Zm It's not. Because she wrote a list with the right punctuation. Like semi-colon,( ; ), and as well as commas.( , )

[@CuervoBoxingTalk]

Yea it is too long. And has too much info about the book. But not enough.. it Should be more simple and less wordy. Semicolons are looked down on by the teachers at my school. This thesis makes me think too much. When i read something. I like it to flow.

[@Bellawhite1]

Bri Zm, there needs to be a period or semicolon after the word angel. I still think the video is an excellent learning tool, and she gave great examples.

[@erikasagastume9384]

no there doesn't because "as Hester moves... 'angel'" is actually a clause and without what comes after it it wouldn't be a sentece.

[@ghastingss5930]

Yeah it is there’s literally like five independent clauses in one sentence 😆

[@sweetie9089]

I'm a sophomore in college who hasn't written a paper for almost two years. This was great. Thank you!

[@wellsfiction711]

Thank you for this video. I was confused on how to start my thesis statement.

[@60SECONDRECAPcom]

+Mat Wells Good to hear! Thanks for letting me know!

[@magicmooney9515]

You are always confused!

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[@matthewreynoso6904]

This video was very helpful! I think you’re a good English teacher!

[@brooklyncosby2087]

Thank you for this!! It has helped me with ALL my assignments since I first listened to it. I've tried simply remembering what she said but it is not as good. I have to watch it every time I go to write an intro for a paper. It is magic. It is just better every time!!!

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This what I’m grateful for on KZbin things like this explain more than my teacher does

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[@K.K248]

the problem is my assignment does not have a question they want me to compare 2 things to each other

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LightTheDrago yes me too 🙄

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[@sandywilson4562]

After banging my head into the wall for the past two days this little video saved my life. Thank you. You have a great way of clearly explaining things.

[@yoyo.1956]

Wow this actually helped it helped me get 80 percent on my English film essay because of the thesis.

[@awcarrick]

Wow, this is spot on. I was going to create my own for my class, but yours is already perfect. I plan to use this video with my students.

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Lazy ass teacher bruh

[@LukeoXx]

At first, I thought you were talking about her thesis and how you were going to use her thesis for your paper while admitting it publicly.

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Anthony Carrick your probably the reason why kids drop out

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You are the prettiest writing teacher

[@Jonas-nc5os]

You secured an A on my exam by making this video. Thanks!

[@omnicave3183]

My thesis of the video: I started to learn about thesis statements but was distracted when I saw how cute the speaker is, the large number of hand movements, and the book holders in the background. After learning very little, I concluded that she has a ring on the right hand and is not yet married, thus leaving an opportunity. Grade me.

[@ITIountainDew]

This is the best video I have seen so far for a proper college level thesis. Great Video!!!!

[@KarlBertyn]

This is by far one the best videos Ive seen. Great JOB.

[@meineely6517]

This helped! Thank you for breaking it down in an understandable way.

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This video is super helpful!

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I'm doing a persuasive essay and this is the best video I've seen so far. Keep doing good vids! There good even after *mathing* 6 years!

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Your video was very helpful when I was stuck in my essay

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what number must i press to repeat that awesome sound effect at 3:41

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[@mariacanul5191]

Omg! This is amazing!!! Thank you for the break down of this!

[@obieldenook1142]

This is still a great video to watch in 2017. Thanks very much, 60second Recap. :)

[@_alphasierra4705]

Can you use the examples that you use in step 3 in the body paragraph(s) as a reason to support your idea?or can you also find another example that relates to the examples you used in step 3?

[@abagantamose]

thank you ,this information was fantastic for my last minute essay

[@dystar112]

I love that this video is short and sweet 😊

[@gloriatureanimentra1332]

Thank you, this was very helpful! Also, if it's not too much to ask, can you make a video about the body paragraph in the same step-by-step method that you did for the thesis statement? I checked out the video for body paragraphs but I needed more. It would be helpful if you did the method where you gave a question and then you showed an exemplar of how you answered the question in the body paragraph. Thanks again for this video, it is awesome! BTW, is it possible for you to do a video on how to succeed in reading comprehension because I swear that is like the main adversity in my life. Once again, thank you very, very much!

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[@mssamoanmami3345]

To the point .Thank you.

[@emmaleclerc-neve92]

How to do write the introduction after you state your thesis? Like how do you lead into establishing your main body paragraph ideas?

[@lexilizarazu5681]

can you please make specific topics like an argumentative essay or a Literary Analysis essay?

[@alainamaschmann4140]

Great video! Helped me revise and simplify my thesis statement!

[@edwardwatson8937]

This is brilliant and the best explanation I've ever seen!

[@zaydlipscomb7459]

How do u write about two books instead of one

[@DemetriusPalacios]

thank you for sharing this great video, I found it very useful. I was helping my youngest daughter with an assignment and I was confused on the Thesis Statement. I hope you make more videos.

[@C12omega]

OMG thank you I got a Class where i'm doing a thesis just found out on Blackboard

[@soundherrajans7235]

Great video! well explained in Short time.

[@LukeoXx]

Thank you for this helpful video!

[@JMorena-x3z]

Good video

[@richardmajece5498]

This video was useful for me when I decided to write my first academic essay. But I also know that on nerdymates you can find help. IELTS is very important if you want to travel abroad or prove that you have a high level of English. I managed to pass it recently so I know what are you talking about. Just try to look for online advices and it will help you in your academic future

[@fablehollis8014]

This helps alot especially because I just recently finished reading the scarlet letter so it's helps me better understand with her thesis

[@Jonathanpz2989]

way better explanation than my teacher, thanks!

[@martinsr6474]

Mam,should I start with a question?And should I write down the question in thesis statement?

[@phahladiramoja5740]

Love the video. It is very helpful and insightful, great stuff.

[@racheldennison8839]

I'm struggling. I need to write a thesis sentence from the question is Education the way to break out of generational poverty?

[@ModPrudencePoder]

Thank you! Your video was helpful!!

[@55MAK55]

I feel like everyone (in my last class) always talked about agency. What are some other key topics that we can write an essay on? I know some being... power struggles, gender roles, revenge (or coping)....

[@jimmyyance1566]

Very helpful. Thank you!

[@marito166]

0:32 (X) doubt

[@emmacrouch3788]

her: “really, how are you going to write an essay without having read the book” me, at midnight with an essay due in 11 hours about the comparison of characters in 2 books that i didn’t read: 🥺

[@retajalhelal5184]

how did you do?

[@abnormalbat1966]

what's that sound? 3:38

[@deejaymusic100]

your instructional video is still a relevant and helpful resource. The examples you gave were spot on for the novel of choice. Thanks for keeping it up.

[@Monae821]

Is there any way I can contact you? Also the links to your website don't seem to work

[@georgiarodrigues9974]

I absolutely love this vídeo. Thanks so much!

[@pegastv9174]

Added tons of resources, thanks

[@carbonc6065]

3:38 UGH, you just brought me back to college and the CLICHES! HOWEVER, this was a great video--nicely done!

[@theloniouscoltrane3778]

Dear Ms. Jenny (Or any English writing professor/teacher): Kindly answer these questions: Q1: Most, if not all, Op-Ed columnists or essayists are merely summarizing and paraphrasing everything that they have read without citation. Is not that considered plagiarism? Q2: What is NOT considered plagiarism? Thanks!

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How many hair flips in this vid

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+Ryan Chang Probably thousands but they're pointless

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XD

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There were 26 hair flips Counted them me self

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[@qamrooshsajjad123]

You should mention both but giving your opinion strongy but not equally to both sides of argument.. I can help you in this regard

[@julissareyes1227]

you helped me so much and i finally understand what a thesis statement is i got 100 on my thesis

[@abdlhmdx]

10 less seconds... We were this close to greatness.

[@tknowtime9860]

You are gorgeous for making thesis statements clear to me

[@itstherancks1295]

Her: Answer the thesis statement question Me: But that's what I need to know how to do ?

[@lovekhosa1153]

May you help to write thesis statement on how to save money

[@rabtechtutorialvideo]

*love how teachers say things like “you can’t write a paper without reading the book” yet I’m out here get a 96 on 10 page papers of books I’ve never even picked up*

[@eternalyap]

0:33 are you sure about that?

[@marito166]

Hahahhaha

[@aneva_borden4683]

Need more examples!!

[@bjm005]

This video is awesome thank you so much, my teacher is trying to help us get better by letting us write the thesis down on a paper and it’s a 0 whenever you wrote a bad thesis, and she’s counting it as a grade!!!!

[@karanmeelu169]

so you mean thesis statement is something which concludes end result of a essay or about what we are going to talk in the upcoming paragraphs am i right?

[@ghjgggtyf]

Yes

[@destiny2727]

Thank you, great insight!

[@mariadiscobay]

sitting here crying bc idk how to write a research paper on censorship (specifically internet censorship in iran) and all i have is a quote in the attention grabber and nothing else 😭😭 i was sick for two days and my teacher won’t even help me. can’t wait to fail sophomore english 1st semester

[@girlplease3217]

Can you use this for conclusions as well as intros?

[@pupperfresh9601]

+Mills Obb Sorta... You can say your thesis in a different way to make sure you recap everything, but try not to repeat your thesis word by word.

[@girlplease3217]

PupperFresh yeah so obviously dont regurgitate your opening but follow a similar structure? i get you

[@kpopanimechannels3354]

You can summarize up your thesis statement into you're conclusion

[@TheonelovedbyGod]

Thank you for the video. It's helpful for those of us who like to listen more than read😁

[@erendiraramirez9828]

Thanks for the tips

[@klowsfred9676]

I know this sounds corny or whatever but this helped me more than a whole term in class

[@highperformancedan]

what if I don't get a question?

[@6.0hhzo]

So grateful for this good video

[@vasappagowda1531]

very useful programme on research writing

[@kirabrewer8592]

I know i sound stupid,but honestly confused.I'm currently working on an Essay and this is confusing to me,my teacher has been showing our class different ways to do this,but i clearly just don't get it.Is there something wrong with me? lmao.

[@aidanmoss4806]

what do you do if you have no question to base your thesis off of?

[@kadens1903]

Aidan Moss make one up

[@aidanmoss4806]

Jimmy neutron thank you!

[@kadens1903]

Aidan Moss your welcome :)))

[@ytpg1000]

This video was great you saved my life

[@kleif5745]

Oh, so basically it's a claim,cite clarify but longer with more fancier use of words and paragraphs... Am I wrong?

[@eboneewilliams7961]

Thank you so much, I was only getting 2's and 3's on my papers and never that holy number 4 because of my sucky thesis statements. I never even went past revise on my TS's or pushed myself, but these steps are so easy that I could do it in my head in case my teacher decides to call on me lol. Thanks from Texas!

[@miguelperez6192]

Thanks for the video Jenny

[@SaeedKhan-Moral-Motivation-786]

it was very helpful. i appreciate you effort to help us in this way.

[@TheHardcoreJoel]

I could write about 2 million stories about the times since I last saw you! nice Video:)

[@brayanfelix8502]

you are awesome :).. even though i didn't understand everything and actually have no idea how to do it. i wish you were my teacher you are way to beautiful *u*

[@60SECONDRECAPcom]

Brayan Vazquez Aw, shucks. But what don't you understand? Just ask!

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+60second Recap u really r awesome but i understood u like 1+1=2 and i also wish u were my teacher to id really like that

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60second Recap® ur breathtaking!!! 😂

[@onceupxn]

Too*

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3:26-3:27 if you say the word" flutter" in your head while your listening through these 2 seconds you will actually hear her say "flutter",now,if you say" the letter" in your brain you will also hear "the letter"......I JUST MADE A NEW YANNY AND LAUREL

[@maria-hr9jg]

I meant head not brain